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I'm Clueless Uke!

Having a good time is what you're all about. You're satisfied just to have someone to eat hamburgers and play video games with, and are completely oblivious to other's manipulative behavior. You don't expect much, and that can be a good thing. You're perfect prey for the Opportunist Seme, who might take advantage of you, but you probably won't even notice, or really care, as long as you're enjoying yourself.

Most compatible with: Opportunist Seme, Romantic Seme Least compatible with: Sadistic Seme, Don't Fuck With Me Seme


Study Room

A boy around 16 or 17 years old, who had black shaggy hair frowned as he went passed several students who wore a black cloak which bore a yellow emblem on the right side. They were screaming profanities at him as he pushed his way past them  and began to descended the stairs when he bumped into a dirty blonde teen whore wore the same as the ones that were taunting him a few moments ago.

"Oh hey Harry." The blonde greeted with a smile as he held a hand out for the Gryffindor to take. Harry brushed the hand aside and stood up brushing his cloak off before moving past the Hufflepuff.

"Hi Cedric." Harry replied back as he went around the Hufflepuff and continued to walk down the stairs when the Hufflepuff called out his name and grabbed ahold of the Gryffindor’s cloak.

“Wait please, I really need to talk to you Harry.” Cedric says as he loosed his grip onto Harry’s cloak when he turned to look at him.

"What is it, Cedric?" The Chosen One asked as he looked at the other not amused.

" I can’t talk to you about it here. Could you come with me somewhere?" the brunet asked.

"Not right now, I have Homework that needs to be done." The Gryffindor informs him but the essay was not due until a week from now but he certainly did not want to be anywhere near the hufflepuff right now.  As soon as he said that the Hufflepuff looked crestfallen, “Ok, fine we can talk.”

“Thanks Harry. You will not regret it.” Cedric said before Harry knew anything the older male had took hold of his hand firmly pulling him to Merlin knows where however that's when he found out that Cedrick led him to the study room that was vacant.

"What is it that you wanted?" Harry questioned as he moved forward into the vacant room before turning around to see Cedric smiling at him and how close he was to Harry and in a flash he came  forward and kissed Harry on his cheeks.

Once Cedric pulled away Harry stared at him awestruck. Before he lifted his hand up to his cheek and rubbed it softly.

"I'm sorry the way, they have been treating you." It was a most sincere apology that the chosen one has ever heard from the hufflepuff.

"It's alright now." Harry mumbled as his face flushed red with embarrassment averting his gaze to the ground.
"So do you forgive me?" Cedric asked, looking at him with big doe eyes that none could say no to no matter hard they tried.

"Yeah I do." Harry said smiling at him.
Study Room
I hope you guys like the new edits to this story.

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Never Enough Time

A teenager around the age of 15 to 16 sat in a all white van with the logo Fenton on the side of the car as he gazed outside the window at nothing in particular. Before he let out another sigh as he watched his father father drive like a maniac through Wisconsin.

"Mr. Fenton, can you drive a little slower." A african american teen asked as he gripped hold of his own seat belt for security as he looked at the orange jumpsuit clad man who was driving in the front seat.

"How about safer." A teen girl murmured with dark clothing and makeup on as she too was cling to her seat belt.

"Come on you guys where's your sense of adventure." Jack, or rather Mr. Fenton says as he speed down a near by corner heading up to  a giant white Mansion that was on top of a hill.

"Why did we have to come along again.?" Goth girl asked looking over at over at her best friend who was gazing out of the window but when she did not get his attention she jabbed his side and hissed, “Danny.”

"Sam, we had to protect my parents from Vlad remember." Danny whispered shooting Sam a glare as he rubbed his side.

“What wrong man, you been out of it ever since we left.” The african teen questioned.

“Its nothing Tucker.” Danny said with authority saying he did not want to talk about it.

"Right." Sam and Tucker said as they rolled their eyes as they came up the driveway to Vlad's house. Exiting the car quickly when the car came to a halt.

"Welcome Maddie, Jack, Daniel and friends, come right on in." A man wearing an all black suit who had white hair pulled back into a white ponytail greeted as he welcome them with a grin. “Come inside.”  As he lead them towards the door of the mansion before a butler opened the door for them. Danny glared hard at the older male as Vlad told them where their room would be during their stay.

"I’m sorry I willn’t be here most of the night, I have something personal that needs my attention but I will be joining you for dinner so until then please enjoy yourselves.  I will see you guys later." Vlad tells them before he turned and walked away. Danny stared as he watched him leave.

"Guys stay here and watch my parents I'm going to go see what Vlad is up too." Danny whisphered to his friends before heading off to the direction in which Vlad walked off too.

Vlad walked down the hall at a quick place before going to to two bay doors and entered his study. Walking over to his desk and fell back into the chair before moving to pull out a medicine bottle and took the pill dry before closed his eyes and waited for Danny to come in following after him.

"Hello Daniel." Vlad said as he slowly opened his tired eyes, looking at the blue eyes that were glaring at him.

"What did you bring us here for Vlad?" Danny asked narrowing his eyes at Vlad. Vlad said nothing as he sat up straight and folded up his hands. "I have nothing planned honestly have no attention to fight you Daniel."

"Then why did you bring us here?" Danny asked as his eye brow furrowed together.

"You will find out in due time Danny. Until then please enjoy your stay here." Vlad said as he got out of his chair and walked over to his private room.

"I'm telling you guys something seriously is wrong with Vlad." Danny tells his friends as they swam in the pool in the backyard.

"Danny, we have been here for two hours already. If he wanted to do something don't you think he would have do it already?" Sam asked as she sat on the edge of the pool sunbathing.

"Yeah Danny. Sam, right maybe Vlad has finally came to his senses." Tucker agreed as he dived into the pool splashing water into Danny’s face.

"I don't know." Danny said wiping the water from his eyes before gazing back towards the mansion.

“Danny! Get out of the pool dear. Dinner is about to start in a hour.” Maddie told her son, as she waved her gloved hand.

“Alright.” Danny said as he swam towards the end of the pool and hoisted himself from inside the pool.

The hour came and went and now, The Fentons, Sam and Tucker were now being lead into the dinning area where they saw Vlad was already seated.

“Vlad my man. I did not see you all day what was so important that you could not hang out today with an old college buddy?” Jack asked as he took the seat to the right of him.

Vlad smiled at Jack, “It was just a bussiness meeting with some my new company.”

“Ohh what is your company about?” Maddie asked sitting beside her husband as Danny, Sam and Tucker were at Vlad’s left.

“It more as a charity for something that I now hold close to myself.” Vlad informs her as the butler and the other attendants began to  serve dinner.

“Beside that why did you invite us here out of the blue?” Danny asked, as her                                                                
Vlad gazed out of window when Danny came into the room.

“Danny!” His mother reprimanded him.

“It is okay Maddie, I would like to tell you as well. It hard to say this but… I have Stage two cancer.” Vlad admitted as the tension that had filled the air broke instantly.

“What! Vlad, you're kidding right?” Jack asked looking at his best friend with a worried look.

“Unfortunately I’m not kidding. I’m about to go through my first round of chemotherapy starting next week and I will be hospitalized  for some time after that since I have a surgery coming up soon. That is why I called you here to make amends to you all.”

"Oh Vlad..." Maddie said as she lifted her hand up to wipe away her tears from her eyes.

“It will be okay, Madeline, Jack. I believe I can make it through this. Lets eat and I will answer all your questions after that.” Vlad says averting his gaze to the plate of food.
I have not been ignore none,I'm sorry for not getting to your notes and comments sooner. I had finally received a new charger, that I have been waiting a month for. I will try to kick it into high gear and up date on commissions and fanfictions, I'm sorry once again. Thanks to the friends that posted up my last two edits! Thank you guys.  Please give me time to reply to all messages and get everything situated. Hopefully none of my files were lost but so far we are looking okay and there are no missing files.
Happy Valentine's Day
A teen around five two sat at a brown desk that overlooked his window as he twirled a blue mechanical pencil in his hand before letting out a sigh and leaned back into his chair. Closing his eyes slowly when he felt a cold breeze brush past him. Slowly opening his eyes he smiled as he looked over at a teen who wore a faded blue sweatshirt with light brown khaki but most of all the strange part about the teen was his lack of shoes, his ghostly pale skin and his crystal white hair.

" Jack.... What are you doing here? I thought you were going to help out Valtina for Valentine's day?" The darker haired teen asked the other.

"Nah she did not want my help saying that I was just going to freeze up the flowers." Jack joked as he sat down on the other's bed. "So what you workout on over there Jamie?"

"Nothing just editing my English essay." Jamie tells him moving to sit beside him.

It had been() years since the defeated Pitch Black. True to his word Jamie never stopped believing but he certainly did change in Middle school Jamie realized that he was gay and came out to his parents who accepted him with open arms and no judgments were passed.

Jamie had told the Guardians as well they were all surprised but accepted him. Jack was the first to accept him because he knew how he felt due to him being bisexual. Jamie thought his friends were going to accept him as well but he was wrong they all shunned him and never talked to them again.

It was in his sophomore year when Jamie realized he liked Jack more than just a friend.

He tried to ignore his feeling in hope that they would go away but they never left just staying strong as ever. So he tried to avoid Jack much as possible, but Jack would have none of that so he cornered him one day demanding to know what was going on.

"I like you, Jack!" Jamie yelled as he stared at the guardian of fun. Jack was taken back at the confession. Jamie felt his world plummet down when he saw Jack face he turned and ran away from the situation.

"Jamie!" Jack said screaming after him as he saw Jamie running away from him. Jack took chase on the other and followed after Jamie. Jack had an advantage using the wind to lift him up he tackled Jamie to the ground.

Jamie struggled trying to be let go. "Let me go, Jack." Jamie screamed but was not meeting the guardian eye.

"Stop struggling Jamie." Jack said as he pinned Jamie's arms to the ground as he sat on top of the teen. "Now that you are listening to me. Jamie I like you too. I'm sorry if I made you seem like I was rejecting you. You know I'm still new to all this interaction with human things."

Jamie grinned as Jack began to ramble, causing the grip on his arm to loosen. Using this to his advantage he quickly pinned Jack the way he was just a few moments ago then slowly went down to kiss Jack.

Once they had confessed they began to date each other. It was a long road with Jamie having to deal with the pains of high school and Jack finding a permit place for him to stay instead of going where the wind was taking him.

It was now the first year of being together and their first Valentines day.

"Hey Jack." Jamie says smiling at his boyfriend next to him. Jack hummed in response locking eyes with the other.

He slowly rose to his feet and stood in front of Jack wrapped his arms around Jack before pulled him into a kiss.

" Happy Valentine's day, Jack." Jamie says smiling.

"Happy Valentine's Day Jamie." Jack told him before they leaned in for another kiss.
It Would not Help Even If I Told you

A teen with bright orange hair and honey brown eyes was walking down the concrete walkway slightly slouched over as he was walking home from his most recent battle with the hollows.  

“There has been more than the usual amount of hollows. Why are they all gathering here in Karakuta for?” Ichigo pondered as a brown badge that had face on it began to flash alerting him to a hollow nearby when he heard the a nonhuman howl in the distance.

Rolling his eyes he took of to a near by park and positioned himself against a tree so it would appear as if he was asleep before placing the badge to his chest before his spirit was jolted out of his body in a black hakama with his signature giant blade on his back before he took off into the direction in which the hollow scream echoed from.

As he made it to bridge in which he crossed as a child with his mother, when he spotted  a white haired man using a longsword with a skull at the hilt to slice right through the hollow.

Slowing Down Ichigo gazed down at the man from at top of the roof before the silver haired man looked directly at Ichigo."Eh, who are you?" The man asked, as Ichigo looked at the man surprised, Ichigo could not sense any spiritual pressure coming of the man so how was he able to see him.

"You can see me?" gaped the substitute soul reaper as he jumped from off the building and landed onto the ground several feet away from the other.

"Of course, you're not invisible!" retorted silver haired man, glaring at shinigami as he placed his sword behind his back before looking at the orange hair man with an eyebrow raised.

"How where you able to that hollow?" Ichigo question as the man tilted his head slightly before standing up straight once more.

"A hollow? What it that?" the half demon said as he lifted his hand to his head and pushed back his bangs that were lying limply on his forehead but now was being kept back by the man’s hand.

Hard brown eyes from Ichigo was looking at Dante trying to size him up before shaking his head, “I can’t tell you if you don’t know already.” Ichigo informs the other.

"Well, that sucks.” Dante says as his hand left his head and fell limply to his side before looking back at Ichigo. “I rather you tell me unless you want. Unless you want me to beat the answers out of  you?" the white haired man offered, gripping his sword as he ran towards Ichigo swinging upwards.

Ichigo quickly jumped back out of the way to avoid the hit as he pointed his sword towards him. "Why are you attacking me! It not like it would do you any good from knowing" the shinigami yelled glaring daggers at the man.

"You say that but allow me to determine what information that I need." Dante informs the the red head before he took off into a run swinging his sword at the other.
Ichigo continued dodge the onslaught of attacks that were sent his way before he swung his own sword as a counter as they stood in a stand still pushing each other back and farther before jumping back and forth.

Dante circled around Ichigo before running towards him and kicking at his feet Ichigo in the stomach causing Ichigo to hold his stomach as he staggered backwards.

“You bastard.” Ichigo coughed as he glared at the silver haired man that had a smug look on his face. Getting back up to his feet he ran at Dante swing his Zangetsu at Dante, but Dante avoided the attack but he did not see the punch that came at him causing him to stagger back slightly.

"Your good for a kid." Dante complimented, smirking as he wiped his cheek.

A vein popped out from the corner of Ichigo's head as he growled angrily, "I'm not a kid!"
Jumping up into the air the two male's grabbed their swords before circling each other, Ichigo took the initiative by striking first. It was Dante turn to be on the defensive and began to dodge Ichigo's attacks.

"Getsuga Tenshou!" Ichigo yelled as he use some of his energy at Dante when he thought he
had an opening but other man did so he flip sideways to move out the way of way before running at Ichigo and kicking him in the stomach sending him crashing to a nearby wall. Ichigo coughed up some blood as he he looked up at the other.

"I know you're stronger than this why are you holding back here?" Dante snarled as he walked towards the orange haired teen and pulled him up by his hair. "So stop holding back!" gritted the half demon between teeth pushing before slamming Ichigo back against the wall.

Ichigo slowly stood, panting as he gripped the hilt of his sword slowly lifting it off the ground  he began to release some of his spiritual energy and screamed, "Bankai!" As a burst of energy engulfed him showing him in a new clad black outfit with a smaller and all black blade.

"Much better." Dante murmured as he tightened his grip on his own sword.

The battle continued and sun began to set both were panting heavily but both ran forward for one last blow but it never made it not instead the two males both fell to ground exhausted.

“I don’t understand, why are you attacking me. From what I can tell you're not a spirit and neither are you a Hollow or human, so what are you then?” Ichigo asked slowly getting up to his knee trying to regain his breathe.

Dante smirked once more as he stood up to his full height and looked towards the sky. “Well as you said before even if I were to tell you I don’t think it would do you any good, by the way my name is Dante." Dante informed the other.

"I...I...Ichigo K..Kurosaki, that is my name." Ichigo rasped out.

"Well it's nice to meet you Ichigo." the white haired man replied back, smirking before picking up his sword and walking away.
It Would not Help Even If I Told you
Hope you guys like this one shot. I'm trying to get better at writing fighting scenes.
I have not been ignore none,I'm sorry for not getting to your notes and comments sooner. I had finally received a new charger, that I have been waiting a month for. I will try to kick it into high gear and up date on commissions and fanfictions, I'm sorry once again. Thanks to the friends that posted up my last two edits! Thank you guys.  Please give me time to reply to all messages and get everything situated. Hopefully none of my files were lost but so far we are looking okay and there are no missing files.

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metalheart64 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
Thank you so much for the cake badge, very kind of you. Would you like to have one back? I'd be delighted to exchange the courtesy! :)
kiddiluna Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
yes. that will be fine
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Hi. This is also Tiffany if you didn't know which I think you don't ;w;
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Tiff-Tiff what up and now i now!
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lol k XD I've been good~ Hope you been too~
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your welcomeMeow :3 Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] 
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Hello, sorry to bother you but can I have some news from my commission, please? :3
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