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I'm Clueless Uke!

Having a good time is what you're all about. You're satisfied just to have someone to eat hamburgers and play video games with, and are completely oblivious to other's manipulative behavior. You don't expect much, and that can be a good thing. You're perfect prey for the Opportunist Seme, who might take advantage of you, but you probably won't even notice, or really care, as long as you're enjoying yourself.

Most compatible with: Opportunist Seme, Romantic Seme Least compatible with: Sadistic Seme, Don't Fuck With Me Seme
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A man had short black hair that was slicked back as he wore a blue spandex that hugged every inch of his well toned body, in the very center of his chiselled chest was a yellow shield and in the inside was a red ‘S’ was flying through town, called Metropolis as he stood on a giant metal globe when he received an message from the mysterious Dark Knight.

"Superman, we have a problem." Batman says over his com device.

"What is it Batman?" The Kryptonian man asked worriedly as he slowly floated off the building and into the air waiting for other superhero to respond.

"Doomsday has escaped." Batman said as he slowly removed his mask from his head as it showed his face as the notorious playboy of Gotham, Bruce Wayne.

"What!" Clark yelled as he clenched his hand angrily, as he glared at nothing in particular in the sky. He was beyond angry, how could Doomsday escape from the super prison he was in it required authorization of every Justice League member and their own secret code a part of the equation and none knew the order.

"Calm down, Clark. They have not lost him, the tracking device which is imbedded inside him is tracking him now and his current position is in Jump City. We will meet there." Batman said before clicking off.

Without wasting no time, Superman haste to the destination where one of his nemesis was currently reaping havoc. Just the thought of Doomsday out of prison made the Kyprotian’s blood boil.

Flying through the sky with rocket like speed, Superman arrived in Jump city in less than 30 minutes. Upon him making to the outer limits of the city, he flew higher trying to survey the ground below, he could hear the screams of the frightened citizens and the sound of police cars.

He learned first key to find your enemy is to look for him with caution of course. If Doomsday seem him he would attack him, besides although he wanted to get the fight over with him, he knew things would get much worse with the citizens around.

"Batman, can you hear me?” Clark started as he got static for a couple of minutes before he heard Bruce’s voice through the com. “Where are you?"

"Factory District, I found Doomsday." Batman answered before it was clicked off once more.

Superman looked down at the city and just northwest of where he was standing he quickly moved over to the factory district of Jump city. Just as he closed in he saw Batman fighting against Doomsday but was easily being back into a corner but Clark swoop down swinging his fist hitting his nemesis square in the jaw sending him stumbling and looked up at him.

"Superman." Doomsday spat, glaring at the Kryptonian.

"Doomsday!" Superman hissed glaring back at him.

Batman choose this time to make his presence known again and threw something towards Doomsday, which was instantly began to zap out his powers. Doomsday growled as he tried to run towards Batman but Superman used his heat vision causing Doomsday to stop in his tracks before Doomsday reach down and tore a piece of the concrete from the street and threw it at  Superman.

Superman thrusted his hand forward breaking the intruding object that was coming after him. Doomsday managed to escape from the device that the Dark Knight had set and was currently engaged in a heated battle with Batman. Bruce using his agility to his advantage he was ducking and weaving his way out of Doomsday’s grasp.

Superman flying from behind grabbed ahold of Doomsday’s arms and held them behind the other’s head,  that's when Batman quickly pulled out his special tasers as a result tazed the hell out of Doomsday knocking him unconscious.

"Let's get him back to his cell where he belongs." Batman said sternly as Superman nodded his head in agreement.
In a quiet suburb in Illinois, there was a young brunette boy stood inside his brother’s bedroom watching over the baby laying in the faint light blue crib. His name was Dean Winchester, he was an eager 4 year old who wanted to help his younger brother in anyway.

Dean was a big boy, so he had to protect his little brother Sam but he had did something bad really bad. His mommy told him never to climb any of the furniture no matter what the reason, but Dean had a good reason it was for his brother, Sammy. He was crying all night before the event had occurred and his mommy and daddy had finally went to sleep not even an hour later he was about to cry again but Dean was there so he tried to make it better.

He had remember that his mommy had told him the that the reason why Sammy cried at night was because he wa hungry.

'Mommy going to kill me.' Dean thought as he glanced around Sam's nursery looking for Sam’s bottle and found it above on the dresser near the door. Sam pouted slightly as he began to wail his little lungs out.

"Shh shhh, shush little Sammy, don't you cry, your big brother Dean is on your side." Dean said as he held his baby brother in his arms and began to rock him slightly left to right, before setting him back into his crib. Dean moved over to the dresser and pulled out some drawers that he could reach and began to climb them like stairs.

Once he reached the ground he skipped happily over to his brother and picked him up and began to feed him.

Once Sammy was full Dean laid him back in his crib and went back to his bed unknowingly his mother was watching Dean through the door.
The Climb
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Prologue
A woman with long wavy auburn hair that cascaded downwards to her hips, she was currently in a giant lecture hall in the local college. Her teacher was a man who looked in his late 80’s and looked ready to kick the bucket anytime.

When he dismissed the class she headed out of the class room, and made down the hall, glancing out the window, she looked passed her reflection that shined her ruby red eyes that is when she sa the sun was setting on the horizon. Daybreak has come, pretty colors were up above, orange and pink mixed together to make beautiful color altogether. She envied those who had all time in world for looking at the sky. Much to her dismay, she didn’t have time for such activities as this,

“Kumi-san? Are you coming?” Kumi’s classmate questioned. With a nod of her head, shortly she followed behind her classmate.

Far away in the red light district of town at a small host club a man with shoulder length silver hair was just clocking in wearing a three piece all black suit with the first three shirts of his button up was undone.

Smiling as he held a glass of red wine in his hand, Homura walked over to his next clients, wearing a charming smile.

“Sorry, I’m late, Ms. Masuda. I had trouble getting you an refreshment.” Homura apologized, placing red wine onto a coaster which he slid it over to her.

“Thank you Kagari-kun.” Ms. Masuda was a widow who had recently lost her husband and was seeking comfort. Homura and Ms. Masuda talked about noting in particular randoms events and minor chitchat options.

As Ms. Masuda’s time came to an end Homura walked her to the door, like usual, kissed her on the cheek before bidding her farewell.

Homura had two more clients one was another widow, including, another who was to be an escort around town tonight.

Although the other widow was more handsy and cried more Homura stayed, furthermore he continued to comfort her. Doing the same as before the host walked her, kissed her on the cheek and bid her farewell as well.

Homura went in the back to gather his items knowing he may not come back until the next day do to his last customer wished for an escort. So he grabbed his black trench coat and headed out to the meeting spot which she had set.

Walking quickly not to draw attention from anyone around him knowing that if one of the street walkers saw him would never be able to get to work in piece.

Soon he found himself in front of a small family restaurant and walked inside when he spotted her signature blue dress on he walked over to her.

“Forgive me, for being late. It was such a lovely night and I lost track of time.” Homura made an excuse, which always seem to work as he sat down next to the woman. She instantly reached out, bringing herself close to him, enjoying closeness between them, occasionally she looked at him with big doe eyes and smiled.

They chatted for a long time before Homura walked her back to her home before glancing down at his watch to see it was currently going on eleven at night.

“Damn, I missed the last train I will have to walk.” Homura murmured to himself as he begins to round a corner when he felt someone bump into his chest and he quickly shot out his arm to catch the person who was about to fall to the ground. His auburn colored eyes caught the eyes of the ruby red ones that were looking back up at him. “Are you alright?” He asked, helping her up.

As soon as their eyes met, Homura felt a wave of relief wash over him and his heart began to beat rapidly. “Is she my ashikabi?”  He thought

“I’m okay.” Kumi said, standing up her feet. To see if her grocery were okay yet she looked down at the bag she was carrying, the contents inside were ruined. Frowning slightly she let out an exasperated sigh. ‘Guess got to go to the store again.’ Suppose another round to grocery store should be okay. She looked up as she felt his gaze upon her, a blush bloomed itself on her cheeks. “W-Well I...I should be going.” She stammered, trying to move around him but before she was out of arm reach Homura reached out his arm, pulling her back slightly towards him causing her to stumble slightly back into his chest.

“I’m so sorry for ruining your stuff at least let me give you money to get yourself some new items.” Homura figured it would only be right if he pays for ruin items

“No it alright really.” Kumi replied, shaking her head slightly.

“No really, here.” Homura insisted, giving her his earnings for today before turning and quickly running away.

“Wait!” Kumi yelled as she notice he had given her five times the amount need for her grocery that had been ruined but Homura was long gone. That is when she found a business card with the money.

“Kagari.” She murmured the name to herself before looking up where Homura had ran too.
Prologue

Across the ocean far from her home a woman who had shoulder length black hair and big brown eyes just exited out of the plane and she was in Lutèce, La ville lumière a.k.a. city of lights, Paname,  the city of love.

“Paris.” Dan breathed out in awe as she looked out into the distance she saw an Iron laced work that was magnificent and most recognised structure in the world, Eiffel Tower. “I finally made it.”


“Momma, what is that?” a younger Dan asked as she saw a picture of the Eiffel tower with her mother standing in front of it.

“Aww.. That is the Eiffel tower, sweetie.” An adult image of young toddler replied.

“Where is it momma?” The toddler asked.

“Its all the way across the ocean a place where you can see the lights even from the countryside there,” Her mom said.

“Really?” Dan inquired, excited as her mom nodded her head. “I want to see it then mom.”

“Mom… I finally made it!” Dan said as she smiled big as she left the plane and entered the airport.

“Welcome.” A shoulder length blond hair frenchman greeted as his wavy tresses was tossed to the side to reveal his ocean blue eyes.

Dan jumped slightly at as she saw the charming young man before her. “Thank you,” Dan responded back to him, grinning as she descended from the plane.

“My name is Francis Bonnefoy, I’m the tour guide you hired.” Francis told her as he moved to keep up the pace with her, like a gentleman he is, he tried to reach for her bags but she moved them out of his grasp.

“So you’re the one that my mom set up for me.” Dan analyzed the frenchmen by looking at his face. Pausing for a moment she continued talking what else, she had planned to say. “Well there’s actually no need for you to be here. I have study every set and location in France until this day so I don’t actually need a tour guide.” Without haste, she begun walking away again, dismissing the blonde off with a wave from her hand.

“Wait!” The tour guide yelped as he continued to follow her out of the airport.

“Could you please stop following me?” The foreinger requested, kindly when her eyes drifted over at him.

“No. I’m your tour guide so I have to be here with you even if you don’t want me too.” Francis told her. Dan sighed before shrugging her shoulders.

“Okay, fine you can stick around but don’t get in my way.” She warned him as she waits in a line for the next cab to show up.

“No need we can take my company private car.” The Frenchman said. Soon, too soon, a slick black sedan pulled up next to them. Francis walked over to the door and held it open. “After you.”

Dan looked at the car skeptical before moving forward and went into the car.
Chapter 2: Sleeping

“You had an accident while you were in the pool with Miss Martian. You hit your head and caused damage to your spinal cord, is in which the reason why you currently can’t or possible ever again feel from your waist and below.” Batman told her. Artemis sat there in shock absorbing all this new information that the Dark Knight was giving to her.

“So I can never be a superhero again?” Artemis says as the realization dawned on her, Batman frowned as he nodded his head. Artemis looked around at the team who all seemed to wear the similar faces, but when she got to M’gann it looked like on of guilt.

“M’gann this is not your fault.” Artemis says firmly as she saw the Martian putting herself down in her mind, but when she said this the Martian looked over and locked eyes with the blonde.

“How can this not be my fault, if I was not the one who suggested we go to the pool you would be fine.” M’gann said as she looked down at the floor as tears streamed from his eyes.

“M’gann, listen I would have gone into the pool, even if you were not with me but I am glad that you did, cause without you there I could have died.” Artemis says. “But there you to save me M’gann.”

M’gann sniffled as her eyes were filled with tears before she lift her hand to wipe them away.

“So do not beat yourself over for this it was not none of your guys fault.” Artemis says as she glared at all of her team mates.

Soon the door opened once again and Batman came into the room. “Artemis, how are you feeling?” he asked as he came closer to the archer’s bed side.

“I’m fine, so what is my condition looking like?” Artemis asked as the tension rose quickly into the air.  Glancing around the room she quickly realised that her condition was far worse than she realized.

“I’m sorry Artemis the doctor did everything they could but you are paralyzed from the waist down.” Batman told her as her emerald green eyes widen in surprise before she quickly looked down at her feet and tried to move her legs but with no success she could not move them.

Soon Artemis felt her breathing grew heavy and irregular and her chest began to tighten and she lifted her hand to clench her chest.

“Artemis?” Robin called out as her  vision began to blur and she turned her head slightly to shake her head no  as she clenched her eyes shut trying to calm herself down.

“We need a Nurse in here!” She heard Kal’dur yell out the door soon there was a sound a pair footsteps and a nurse trying to move her friends out of the room. Soon she could not hear anything after that.

She heard the pounding of footsteps and the ushering and protest of her teammates as her vision went black and she faded into the abyss.

“What is going on what happened in there?” M’gann cried as she looked back at the room where the nurse was closing the blinds to the room.

“M’gann, calm down I’m sure she is okay.” Robin says trying to reassure the martian but he was not sure of himself. M’gann nodded her head softly knowing that at Star Labs they would give her the best car as possible.

“How about we all go home and get some rest before we can visit Artemis once more. I don’t think we will be able to see her again today.” Kal’dur informs them as he looked at the tired faces of his teammates.

They all looked about to protest but Batman voice interrupted any train of thought.

“Kal’dur is right, all of you need to go home and get some sleep I will alert you guys if there are any changes to her condition.” Batman tells them his tone leaving no room for argument.

Inside the room with the doctor and nurses.

“Doctor, we can not wake her.” One of the nurses said as she looked at the young superhero.

“Damn it we lost her, she slipped into a Coma.” the Doctor says as he looked at the steady heartbeat and brain activity that was being shown on the computer monitor.

“Where am I? What is this place?” Artemis says to herself as she was falling deep within her subconscious as she watched the events to play out when she first decide she would become a superhero.

Artemis was walking with her mother through Gotham, going back home from grocery shopping when a man came buy and stole her mom’s purse and none dared to help them.

“Its okay Artemis things happen.” Her mother told her.

“No, that was not right. He was bad to steal from us and one day I am going to catch him and be good.” Artemis says.


“That right that is when I decide I wanted to be a superhero.” Artemis says before she closed her eyes and began to her teammates voices.

“Hey there artemis, this is M’gann. The doctor told us that talking to you would help, so everyday from now on until you wake I will tell you about my day.” M’gann says as she began to ramble on and on about things that were happening to her.

“M’gann,  I am here what are you talking about.” Artemis says.

“I’m sorry Artemis. That we are not able to do much else besides this but if you are able to hear this you are a valuable asset to me, to us…” Kal’dur tells her.

“Kal’dur….” Artemis murmurs.

“Well… I do not know really what to say, I know shocking right, I am Kid-Mouth or what you call me but I’m speechless. I do not know what to say of to do that will make you wake up faster or how to comfort the other Artemis, so please wake up we need you.” Wally says as he voice begins to crack and tears stream from his eyes.

Artemis was shocked as Wally told her this and lifted her hand to wipe away the tears that were about to fall.

“I do not know why I have to do this it not scientifically prove that me talking will help you but I guess it does not hurt to try…. Artemis you fight well, not as well as me but well enough… God why is this so awkward…. Artemis just get well soon okay.” Connor informs.

Artemis stifled a laugh but smiled gratefully at Conner.

“Artemis, you need to wake up you are need here.  Everyone, including me are worried. We all miss you here so please wake up.” Robin says.

“Guys… Guys wait for me okay.” Artemis says determinedly as she slowly opened her eyes.
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WaltonZoO Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thank You Hug BROFIST 
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kiddiluna Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Writer
your welcomeMeow :3 Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] 
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KoalaOShiz Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello, sorry to bother you but can I have some news from my commission, please? :3
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kiddiluna Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hello, sorry for the wait. I'm so sorry I just came back to school and I no excuses but I have not even began this commission. I'm sorry I only wrote like a paragraph for your story and now i will make sure to work on it today.
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KoalaOShiz Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, I understand
school is by far more important than me ;}
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kiddiluna Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Don't say that i will work on it. T-T I promise it will just take a little more time than anticpated
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Kenjisama Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy birthday~~
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kiddiluna Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much
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Haruka28 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday~ Best wishes~ ☆
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Thank you so much
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